Bud the Teacher

Inquiry & Reflection for Better Learning

Main menu

Skip to primary content
Skip to secondary content
  • Home
  • About
  • DML2012
  • Get in Touch
  • ITSC 12

Post navigation

← Previous Next →

NPM 2011: Prompt 14

Posted on April 14, 2011 by Bud Hunt

Coors Field Wide Angle
Creative Commons License photo credit: Eric Kilby #

Was he safe?  Is anyone? #

Google+EvernoteEmailWordPressRead It LaterInstapaperShare
This entry was posted in Poetry, Writing, Writing Prompt by Bud Hunt. Bookmark the permalink.
Logging In...

Profile cancel

Sign in with Twitter Sign in with Facebook
or

Not published

CommentLuv badgeShow more posts

  • 11 Replies
  • 5 Comments
  • 0 Tweets
  • 0 Facebook
  • 6 Pingbacks
Last reply was 393 days ago
  1. Kevin Hodgson
    View 399 days ago

    (taking a chance on a prose poem today)

    He’s running diamonds in his mind, out beyond second base where fly balls drop like stars, only every once in a while. The time-lapse camera unfolds in its summer laziness, as if time were all that there were in the world and no one had to worry about the hours. Crouched down, glove resting on his knee, jaws working overtime on the raw piece of Juicy Fruit as his mind wanders to the crowd in the stands, dripping ketchup and cheese and ice cubes on their laps as they ready themselves for the pitch. They don’t see him, here, in this field of green. They don’t see him. He spies the red hat and winks, knowing no one is watching. He winks again, as if he were a firefly sending out messages to the sky, which is too busy to answer anyway. If he were the ball, where would he go … he ponders this as the crowd’s voice surges forward, lending velocity to the pitch. He waits for that moment of silence between the throw and the hit, and gulps in anticipation for the possibilities that exist in the absence of action.

    –Kevin
    the podcast: http://www.cinchcast.com/dogtrax/poetry-podcasts/207993
    Kevin Hodgson´s last [type] ..I’m Writing- Too So Should You

    Reply
    • Stephanie Elliottreplied:
      View 398 days ago

      I want to know more about this would-be baseball star/philosopher. This is wonderful!
      –Stephanie
      Stephanie Elliott´s last [type] ..Poemaday 13- Cartography

      Reply
  2. CBethM
    View 398 days ago

    Safe?! How the hell could he be safe?
    Are you blind?
    Have you lost your mind?
    Get outta here!

    Things get thrown
    Tempers flare
    Deep angry voices carry
    up to the bedroom above

    Safe?! How the hell could he be safe?
    Are you blind?
    Have you lost your mind?
    Get outta here!

    He stands on the deck
    grilling and enjoying the sunshine
    when he hears his words
    mimicked
    repeated
    spit back
    at the neighbor kids
    running and playing in the backyard
    He loses his appetite.

    Reply
  3. Stephanie Elliott
    View 398 days ago

    Pinch Hit </b

    History hits this second
    like ball smacking bat,
    or is it the other way around?
    Either way, the crack of collision cannot be ignored.

    No one is safe.
    "Heads up!" we yell,
    but most move to a fetal position,
    arms protecting a hidden head.

    The pitch: My parents were married today,
    nearly four decades ago. A curve ball.

    The swing: Pretend it was the game plan all along.
    It took me thirty years to realize
    I was the curve
    that had them swinging.

    The play: The ball drops into left center;

    the runner goes from still to sprint.
    A child changes everything,
    until it doesn't and life returns to being
    what we know. Inning after inning.
    Sunflower seed shells accumulate on the concrete.
    Smack! In a second everything is in motion again.

    Someone heads for home, someone prepares for the force of the slide.
    The sound lets us know,
    –the sound of then becoming now, becoming forever–
    on the field, in the stands
    no one is safe.
    Stephanie Elliott´s last [type] ..Poemaday 13- Cartography

    Reply
    • Stephanie Elliottreplied:
      View 398 days ago

      Sorry for the html goof — not intended to be all in bold!
      Stephanie Elliott´s last [type] ..Poemaday 13- Cartography

      Reply
  4. Poem | Charles's Class Blog
    View 394 days ago

    [...] was inspired to write a poem about this photo The ball is hit the batter runs. The fielder fields and throws the ball. The runner is running to [...]

    Reply
  5. Poem about baseball. | Jeremiah's Class Blog
    View 394 days ago

    [...] I  was inspired to write a poem about this photo. [...]

    Reply
  6. NPM Prompt 14 | Bay's Class Blog
    View 394 days ago

    [...] picked this picture because I like [...]

    Reply
  7. NPM~Ball Park | Meg's Class Blog
    View 393 days ago

    [...] was inspired by this photo to make the poem [...]

    Reply
  8. | Jonathan's Class Blog
    View 393 days ago

    [...] was inspired by this picture to write this poem [...]

    Reply
  9. NPM~Baseball Field | Nik's Class Blog
    View 393 days ago

    [...] This picture inspired me to write this poem [...]

    Reply
Proudly powered by WordPress