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NPM 2010: Prompt 28

Posted on April 28, 2010 by Bud Hunt

Man with a female spirit
Creative Commons License photo credit: National Media Museum #

There are spirits hiding in every album.  No, really.  Go look. #

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Last reply was 745 days ago
  1. Kevin Hodgson
    View 750 days ago

    (Somehow, your reference to an album had me remembering the long hours as a teen in my room, listening to Led Zep.)

    I’d have to go searching the dusty attic for that album
    of music
    in vinyl
    that I used to hold in my hands for hours as I dropped
    the needle
    on the turntable
    and absorbed the amplifier of Jimmy Page, ringing out,
    with urgency
    against the voice
    of Robert Plant, screeching out stories of walking side by side
    with death
    in Mordor
    as my parents played their Doobie Brothers downstairs
    or Charlie Parker
    or Steely Dan
    even as I descended into the darkness of music above
    before returning
    for quick snack.

    http://vocaroo.com/?media=vsqRKGONd8SGRQfgA

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  2. Kelly
    View 749 days ago

    having a hard time writing a poem and not a short story!

    A superstitious love we had, tragic hearts & haunting trysts
    I called to you, beyond the grave
    You answered like a shadow and came to me veiled in death.
    Oh! The ache and longing you left behind
    I join you now and become your ghostly beloved.

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    • Kevin Hodgsonreplied:
      View 749 days ago

      “tragic hearts & haunting trysts”

      Nice

      Kevin

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  3. Bud Hunt
    View 749 days ago

    I ne’er saw you much
    before you left.
    And still, not never after.

    I sought you out
    among the few;
    I even asked the pastor

    If there’re a chance
    you could come back,
    would it not be
    disaster?

    He told me no
    I wandered off,
    another horse to pasture.

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    • Kevin Hodgsonreplied:
      View 749 days ago

      I like the ending here, Bud. A nice phrase.

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      • Kellyreplied:
        View 748 days ago

        Bud, why aren’t you writing more poetry here this month? That was delightful!
        I like the “ne’er”…I wanted to add more “poetic” words of old, but need more experience/exposure…but which is why I did add my, “Oh!” :)

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  4. J. E. Netten
    View 745 days ago

    Sally said;
    “Leave her now,
    she’s dead.”
    but not to me.

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