NPM 2010: Prompt 27 Posted on April 27, 2010 by Bud Hunt photo credit: Torley # This place, like many others, isn’t real. That doesn’t keep people from stopping by. #
I feel your fingertips
bringing me back to reality
as the image fades
and colors drain.
http://vocaroo.com/?media=vNDfGwuTBZ8SyHCkm
“short but sweet”…
I’m blinded by the towering images.
that dwarf me and put me into a solar spin.
A jewel encrusted landscape of futuristic dreams,
the destination hovers before me ,
as I unlock my earthly memories
light years away.
hmmm…is there an edit button?
silly, but the first period should be a comma and there should not be a comma after “me”
I like that “solar spin” phrase, Kelly
The reflection caught me
off guard, you’d tried so hard
to illuminate my thoughts
with visions of your reality.
I cried,
it was a tragedy
to admit our sentence over
like the end of a rainbow
or our luck, a three leaf clover.
You remained lost in art
lost, lost, I cried – Lost.
I wanted to stay with you
but at what cost?