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NPM 2010: Prompt 17

April 17th, 2010 · 8 Comments

Time and Back
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Whoosh.

Tags: Poetry · Writing

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  • Kevin Hodgson // Apr 17th 2010 at 3:20 am

    (I don’t know why this picture reminded me of this conversation with my grandmother, but there you go … the spark of poetry)

    My grandmother used to talk of “streakers”
    in Central Park as
    daring urban pirates who removed their clothes
    to sail through the crowds.
    I imagine she wished she could join them,
    freeing herself of her upbringing so she could dash out
    amidst the wide-eyed public and maybe catch someone’s attention
    for just a moment.
    Fingers cupped around her mug of tea,
    passing a cookie across the table to me,
    she no doubt felt landlocked in life
    while all I could wonder about was,
    where did all their clothes go?

    http://vocaroo.com/?media=volcrFieR6N44tQx0

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    Kelly Reply:

    urban pirates…
    landlocked in life…
    me likey

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  • Kelly // Apr 17th 2010 at 11:32 pm

    my poem today stems more from the wonderful day I had today in Longmont…but I think it will piggyback on this cityscape and the beauty of the sky….

    My Heart is Full Tonight
    Filled as a Life Already Lived
    Yet Still Room For My Life to Come
    My Smile will Not Fade as I Slumber
    In this Home that Surrounds me
    Inside and Out
    the Hearts of Many Aid in my Love
    For what I See in Front of me
    and For what I Feel on my Toes
    I Stretch out my Arms in a Giant
    Hug of Thanks

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    Kevin Hodgson Reply:

    I liked “My smile will not fade as I slumber” — it’s very visual, Kelly.

    Kevin

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  • Andrew Forgrave // Apr 18th 2010 at 4:55 am

    I think we’d learn a lot,
    were we to turn a day upon it’s end.

    Upset the clock,
    Rise with the dusk,
    and
    See the other world,
    The world that sleep obscures.

    Costanza opposite.
    Three Boxes — not for us!!
    we live like Jack.

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  • Bud Hunt // Apr 18th 2010 at 10:36 pm

    Perspective

    Some say the lights are falling,
    I say I chose to make the world go up.

    Some say the night is calling,
    I say I chose to make the world go up.

    Oh, deceit and dismay,
    We all may sling such words about.
    And dither on defining things.
    Who really knows when right is done?

    You, you say I made your day drop down.
    I say you chose to make the whole thing up.
    And you claim I made the pain hurt more.
    I say I chose to drain the whole darn cup.

    And still, it’s dark, and I’m alone.
    But I can make the world go up.
    Yes, I choose to make the world.

    Shut up.

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    Claudia Ceraso Reply:

    He said -Hush. Shut up.
    My answer? No answer.
    I threw two pieces of chalk
    to the blackboard of the night.

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    Kevin Hodgson Reply:

    I’m standing on my head again
    in order to reverse what you see through my eyes
    so that when you talk in negative,
    I only hear positive;
    and when your words shoot sparks of anger,
    I only see colors;
    and when you sleep to dream in nightmares,
    I only taste silence.

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