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NPM 2010: Prompt 14

April 14th, 2010 · 8 Comments

Chromatic Entropy
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I think we’ve got all the pieces.  Let’s get to work.

Tags: Poetry · Writing

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  • Kevin Hodgson // Apr 14th 2010 at 3:38 am

    (This reminded me of Curious George, for some reason)

    I remember that story about the monkey who was so curious,
    he ate himself a piece of the puzzle
    and got himself sick.
    I wonder what it might taste like,
    if I were to nibble on a piece of the looming Eiffel Tower
    or the twisting, turning Great Wall of China
    or maybe a flower floating on a still pond
    or a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle caught in motion
    or the edge of floating Earth as shown from space
    or maybe even some home-made puzzle
    cobbled together with photographs of those I love
    and have loved.
    I’d injest that montage of sharp edges and soft lines slowly
    so that I could savor the experience,
    as if the pieces might still come together as one and make me a memory
    I will never forget.

    http://vocaroo.com/?media=vsn9UwyY8cz25WIaZ

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    Andrew Forgrave Reply:

    Lovely. (Curious George is one of our heroes.) But what great metaphor for learning and meaning making!

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  • Susan Carter Morgan // Apr 14th 2010 at 6:33 pm

    A little bile, a little congestion
    Too much fever, over-reacting white blood cells
    Pieces of the puzzle give no answers
    And, in the meantime, we wait.

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  • Kelly // Apr 14th 2010 at 7:25 pm

    I’m puzzled by
    why we don’t fit anymore
    all the pieces are there
    but now they are scattered
    and I have not the desire to
    put it back together
    yet

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  • Erin // Apr 15th 2010 at 1:07 pm

    Once
    my life made sense
    organized, fun, happy

    but now
    I feel scattered
    and shattered

    will I ever see the picture
    these pieces make
    again?

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    Kevin Hodgson Reply:

    I like the way you use scattered and shattered, Erin — it provides a rhythmic center to the poem.

    Kevin

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  • Andrew Forgrave // Apr 17th 2010 at 10:29 am

    I see
    the challenge spread before us.
    See the gaps
    the bits together we must join.
    See out
    the glassened windows (keep them closed!)
    And spot, at once, immediate,
    the danger
    inherent in that rectangular floor-bound radiator grill.

    How can we put all this together
    When
    Should one tiny bit elude us?

    Better not to start.
    Avoid the mess.
    Avoid the challenge.
    Avoid the chance that
    we might fail
    to get each tiny bit
    exactly right.

    Just box it up.
    We’ll leave it to another group.
    Another team of souls adventurous,
    Adventurous enough to do it first.
    Second. Or third.

    Send me a picture when it’s done.
    That’s good enough for them.

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    Kevin Hodgson Reply:

    “Send me a picture when it’s done” — nice

    Kevin

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