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NPM 2010: Prompt 11

Posted on April 11, 2010 by Bud Hunt

Amazing birds
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Hum. #

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Last reply was April 13, 2010
  1. Kevin Hodgson
    View April 11, 2010

    No I won’t
    fly like that;
    Your heart beats too fast
    for me.
    My wings flap slowly
    and I would rather let the wind
    carry me
    than me, carry the wind,
    so, no,
    I won’t
    fly like that;
    although I marvel at your speed
    and wonder at what you miss
    in your rush to get there so quick.
    No, I won’t
    fly like that;
    I’m content to float here
    where the air is so still
    I can fade away and think.

    http://vocaroo.com/?media=vv3qRlsOispVAWSRz

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    • Kellyreplied:
      View April 11, 2010

      then goodbye goodbye
      leave you behind
      to float & fade & forget
      we do not miss
      just many more beats in our hearts to
      embrace
      as we fly like that

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      • Kevin Hodgsonreplied:
        View April 12, 2010

        In the absence,
        I drop and crash;
        I never imagined that your wings would beat my heart …

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  2. Bill Ferriter
    View April 11, 2010

    Flutter-flutter-sahluurrp.
    Flutter-flutter-sahluurrp.
    Flutter-flutter-sahluurrp.
    Lookin’ for the nectar.

    Flutter-flutter-sahluurrp.
    Flutter-flutter-sahluurrp.
    Flutter-flutter-sahluurrp.
    Lookin’ for the nectar.

    Heart beating,
    Always eating,
    Lookin’ for the nectar

    Never stop
    Might miss a drop
    Lookin’ for the nectar.

    Blooms so sweet
    Hummy’s treat.
    Lookin’ for the nectar.

    Gotta run,
    Bud is done
    Still lookin’ for the nectar.

    Flutter-flutter-sahluurrp.
    Flutter-flutter-sahluurrp.
    Flutter-flutter-sahluurrp.
    Lookin’ for the nectar.

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    • Kellyreplied:
      View April 11, 2010

      this reminds me of a hilarious essay I read in the New Yorker about bees & addiction.
      kudos!

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      • Kellyreplied:
        View April 11, 2010

        ps
        I’m also thinking it needs a good beat/rap :)

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        • Bill Ferriterreplied:
          View April 12, 2010

          Thanks, Kelly. I just recorded it with Vocaroo:

          http://vocaroo.com/?media=v3xYCSQp8BC2Te2BB

          Really thinking that my central stanzas need another line to keep the rhythm going. I kept wanting to say one, anyway.

          I also realized that there’s a double meaning here for me: I’m the hummingbird, looking for nectar from my PLN.

          Constantly plugged in to Twitter and blogs etc—I sometimes act like the hummingbird.

          Wild how that came to me after writing!

          Bill

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  3. Kelly
    View April 11, 2010

    hum
    a bar of chocolate kisses
    stolen bases balls and baskets
    tiskets & twos
    terrible aches
    pains of labor and
    love
    conquering all the names
    and facing myself & me &
    I
    sing but I don’t know the words

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  4. Writing (digital) Poems with Bud | Kevin's Meandering Mind
    View April 13, 2010

    [...] wondering what I might write about today. I’ve been using Vocaroo to record as podcasts, and Bill has followed my lead. The other day, Kelly responded to a poem of mine with a poem of hers, and then [...]

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  5. Andrew Forgrave
    View April 13, 2010

    Bird Thing
    ————-

    Just look’it that bird thing.
    Like that Avatar movie.
    Wings don’t look like that!

    Any earthly creature
    takes on an unearthly form
    when you study it
    long enough to see it
    as it really is.

    Life is full of
    wonder,
    colour,
    movement,
    stillness,
    Life.
    You just need to look for it, see it.

    It’s there.

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