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NPM 2010: Prompt 4

Posted on April 4, 2010 by Bud Hunt

Four Boxes
Creative Commons License photo credit: Bright Tal #

There is a letter waiting to be written today.  Who’s it for?  What’ll it say? #

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  1. Tweets that mention » NPM 2010: Prompt 4 Bud the Teacher -- Topsy.com
    View April 4, 2010

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  2. Kevin Hodgson
    View April 4, 2010

    Dear computer,
    Oh, how you have served me well these long mornings
    as I have tapped away in near silence to the musings
    of my mind.
    I forgive you the re-starts, the pauses, the endless rebooting and even the lost files:
    everyone has their difficulties and my fingers often run too fast
    even for me.
    You did not panic when the little green XO came into the house,
    nor did you bat an eyelash when the laptop arrived like some long-distant cousin.
    The open source Netbook did not scare you
    and you were silent as a star as I breathed out excitement
    about the Macbook at school.
    The iTouch no doubt sent a quiver down your motherboard,
    but it, too, has its place, in another room,
    docked and loaded with music and games and almost out of sight,
    out of mind.
    Here, with you, I still come to write.
    Here, with you, I still navigate the world.
    Here, with you, I remain.
    But I wonder …. will you still be here another year
    or are you soon to be gone,
    replaced with what the hipsters and hypersters all say will change the world?
    I sense panic in your font, old friend, and can only say that we all adapt
    when the price is low enough and the interest, great enough.
    I remain, still stationary yours,
    Me.

    http://vocaroo.com/?media=vS2Cv1e3T4sMkxijK

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    • Jo Hawkereplied:
      View April 10, 2010

      Love this one, Kevin!

      Reply
  3. Andrea Zellner
    View April 4, 2010

    the absence
    of your name

    signed illegibly
    at the bottom

    of a card
    you won’t buy
    at the dollar store

    makes me pull
    at piles of your letters
    (pictures of kittens and flowers,
    even the pope)
    I’ve kept in a shoebox
    to run my fingers
    over the familiar scrawl

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    • Kevin Hodgsonreplied:
      View April 5, 2010

      Andrea,

      I love your phrasing in your poems, and your last lines always get me in the throat.
      Thanks
      Kevin

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      • Andrea Zellnerreplied:
        View April 5, 2010

        That’s so kind of you, Kevin. Thanks. You should know that I am seeing how much you’ve been writing and it inspires me to write, too. I love that we are in this together!

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  4. Kelly
    View April 4, 2010

    Moment of glee when I see a card addressed to me!
    Answering to friends near and far.
    Imagine a world with no computers.
    Love texts? Love tweets? Love letters.

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  5. Ingrid Veilleux
    View April 4, 2010

    I LOVE the idea of a poetry prompt per day… I will be using it to write poetry daily this month. Hope you will keep the prompts up… The photos are great. Found this link on twitter for teachers. Am an educator as well. Thanks!

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  6. Andrew Forgrave
    View April 12, 2010

    The Closer
    ———–

    He sneaks in,
    Sidles up, paper in hand.
    (I may be working.)

    Tenders his request,
    In written form.

    These little notes,
    “Dear Dad,  ….”
    begin …

    And then 
    his wish, 
    his want, 
    his need,
    expressed in child’s script.
    The letters, each and every one,
    Prepared to share, to ask,
    To generate the magic answer “Yes.”  

    More time for Hope,
    you see,
    Between the asking and the answer,
    When you sit and write it down.

    More time for Hope,
    you see,
    When you ask for paper and a pen,
    A kind of warm-up act,
    the question yet to come.

    A toy, perhaps.
    A visit to the Y,
    A bike ride.
    (A toy, again.)
    These little wants,
    These simple, tiny things.

    The letter’s letters make it harder to say “No,”
    Than if he’d simply asked.

    Where has the spontaneity gone?
    What pressing great constraints make it so hard for a father to say “Yes,”
    To give his son that simple confidence,
    That he can ask,
    And his wish will be done?

    (Granted, we’re trying to teach discipline, too. 
    And that you can’t always have everything that you want,
    Or not always at the moment of wanting.
    We always agree that there’s a real problem with that.)

    But still.

    He ends the notes, most times,
    Regardless of the query,
    With closing,
    “Love ….”

    And then, a postscript,
    Closing line,
    The back-up plan,
    The failsafe.
    Always guaranteed.
    In case the first, is “No,” or “Not Today.”

    This one will evermore and always prompt a “Yes.”

    “P.S. … Can I have a hug?”

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