
photo credit: Bud the Teacher
Juxtaposition is a powerful tool in the hands of a poet. Today, put two things together, whether they belong or not.

photo credit: Bud the Teacher
Juxtaposition is a powerful tool in the hands of a poet. Today, put two things together, whether they belong or not.
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Kevin Hodgson // Apr 6th 2009 at 3:46 am
i am the white blanket
i am the cold:
the chill that comes with spring;
the frost that covers you
so that you lay quietly dormant,
expectant for release,
only to be told to wait, wait, wait;
i hesitate,
knowing that once the snow has melted,
the ice removed,
you will come into your own without me
and our roles reversed — i will be gone,
no longer necessary –
and that, i cannot even begin to fathom
beneath this white blanket
we share together
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Kevin Hodgsons last blog post..Your Alliteration Days
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Maria Monaco // Apr 6th 2009 at 2:51 pm
I can feel my own
warm,
icy breaths
as I look down at
those towering pines
and huddle
in that cold nature scene
blanketed in the weight
of my laptop
Maria Monacos last blog post..Pay attention
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Ken Allan // Apr 7th 2009 at 2:58 am
Herbaceous borders tidily trimmed,
Patterned pansies on ledges,
More mowed down, ground skimmed,
Clean cut green, cut hedges.
Feathery lawns untailored untethered
Tangles of knotgrass and wrackweed,
Daisies, dandelion ragged leaf sprays,
Tigergrass spills and phlox edges.
There’s never a fill nor a scarcity
Of pretensions or implicit pardons,
So pick an eyeful of diversity
From the treasures in our City gardens.
Ken Allans last blog post..In Praise Of Plaudit
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Andrew Forgrave // Apr 7th 2009 at 4:35 am
Gosh-durned April snow,
“What the heck?” we all grumble.
I thought it was Spring!
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billimarie // Apr 7th 2009 at 1:57 pm
Machineguntoy
Automatic point
at eye-line, the passageway
to muddled brains
between eyes that caught pellets
when they tickled
my belly, shoulder, thighs.
Nail-bitten fingers twitch
on triggered strokes
before I am jerked.
Last rounds
Last rounds
caressing an empty barrel.
-b
billimaries last blog post..April 5th – "Machineguntoy"
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National Poetry Month 2009 4.6 The Far Mountains « Fits & Fugues // Apr 7th 2009 at 8:18 pm
[...] by Rick Tanski on April 7, 2009 Written in response to Bud’s prompt 6: Juxtaposition The Far [...]
Rick Tanski // Apr 7th 2009 at 8:18 pm
The Far Mountains
A mantle white has freshly fallen on the far mountains,
But through the dirty window
Crowd grimy cars on the pavement
A crisp curtain of blue crests the peaks,
And the highway’s rumbling trucks
Fling their blackened mist
High and low the horizon hops in a pulse line,
Yet the angular rooftops
Creep relentlessly across the plain
Situated in marvelous splendor the scene unfolds,
For the straight concrete barriers
Feign creation in mocking assembly
Toward the skies the summits soar,
So progress itself is even outreached
Revealing feeble hubris
Rick Tanskis last blog post..National Poetry Month 2009 4.6 The Far Mountains
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Ed Webb // Apr 7th 2009 at 10:40 pm
In my class, I paused,
turning from talk of fatwas:
It’s friggin’ snowing!
Ed Webbs last blog post..Media & Identity in the Middle East – Noted This Week (weekly)
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Ruki Lawton // Apr 8th 2009 at 9:34 pm
Yesterday’s beyound infinity, tomorrows beyound today
Remorse and tightened grips over what will never stay;
All those fleeting memories and youth that was admired,
Time comes with a vengence and is here but not desired.
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